tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5806687383879343436.post2043627035125519172..comments2023-06-02T07:35:49.408-07:00Comments on Mi Blog: A literary essay on "The Moving Finger"Joako.Pardo.Labordehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16765780294694994364noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5806687383879343436.post-79560203829269418842020-12-16T03:10:56.371-08:002020-12-16T03:10:56.371-08:00One never get to know the real Mr Grancy-it is eit...One never get to know the real Mr Grancy-it is either his real personality effaced,stiffled by his reaction to the loves of his life-at one moment he is smoothered and "embowered" that his friends cannot help but accept the shadow he has become.The second Mrs Grancy seems to make him blossom on the outside whilst he himself is so enchanted to a fault.Evans Mandengendahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18361185891389824908noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5806687383879343436.post-35106649765423797302020-11-03T23:38:23.845-08:002020-11-03T23:38:23.845-08:00In what ways does Wharton vividly reveal the effec...In what ways does Wharton vividly reveal the effect Ralph Grancy’s wives have on himAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09467979200411446224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5806687383879343436.post-89838119560682877272019-07-08T12:54:31.875-07:002019-07-08T12:54:31.875-07:00Joaquín,
Very good work. I believe this is a much...Joaquín, <br />Very good work. I believe this is a much improved version of your first draft. These are my comments:<br />-"Therefore, here is presented the idea of control, because not matter her death, she still belongs to him, being imprisoned in the house, inside the portrait. He also started to believe that she’s still alive (he too has conversations with it)." This is the way you closed your first paragraph. You should change the order of the sentences and include in the text, with no brackets, the last part. <br />-Be careful with the pronouns he/she, you mistaken them some times and it's a bit confusing. <br />Mark: 10 (ten)Tuti Brito Evanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13269276331517181420noreply@blogger.com